tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3635885715052898904.post2023933379642419872..comments2009-04-02T10:27:53.523-07:00Comments on Global Warming: Potential SourcesKanwalYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15387485622136869918noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3635885715052898904.post-59024459627958820202007-11-23T17:03:00.000-08:002007-11-23T17:03:00.000-08:00Wow, great work here! You not only caught the eye ...Wow, great work here! You not only caught the eye of one of the blogs in your community, but your writing really works well here. You pace nicely, provide great details and hyperlinks, and I can really see that you are digging deeply into this topic and braching out to writing groups well outside our classroom. This is just awesome work!Julie P.Q.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08903299904855079153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3635885715052898904.post-62170932943278613232007-11-22T23:11:00.000-08:002007-11-22T23:11:00.000-08:00Hi, I'm Wadard, the blogger at Global Warming Watc...Hi, I'm Wadard, the blogger at Global Warming Watch. Thank you so much for your kind words, I value your feedback.<BR/><BR/>You mentioned that, "Another thing I like about this blog is the writing format of the blogger. The blogger does not go on about something that is unnecessary. In fact, everything is shortly put and just straight to the point. I liked that this blog was well on topic and straight to the point because I think I need practice in that area. When I start writing, I realize that I have more to write about then I thought. However, I never know how to shorten my writing because I feel as if I will miss out on something."<BR/><BR/>As you spotted, for me the secret to writing well is brevity (keeping things brief and short). A good way to teach yourself this this — one idea per sentence. If you have a long sentence, break it into clauses that support the idea. If it is a complex idea, break it down into sentences, and format the sentences into a paragraph. That way you can communicate better, and not miss out on anything. Try to stick to three sentences per paragraph. <BR/><BR/>Don't be afraid of writing short, one sentence paragraphs.<BR/><BR/>Learn the rules of grammar. And finally, to invigorate your writing, write in the 'active voice'.<BR/><BR/>Forgive my presumption in offering this unsolicited advice, but I love writing, and I see that you do too and that you want to write even better.<BR/><BR/>Plus I am doubly pleased you chose Global Warming as your English 112 topic. Good on you. As a student — the type of world you inherit is going to be dependent on how much you and your generation learns now about the way it works, and what you do wit that knowledge.<BR/><BR/>Peace.Wadardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07900339523864136167noreply@blogger.com